I started to feel very scared sitting there all alone…it just didn’t feel right for me to be there. I slowly stood up from the chair thinking of going home, but suddenly something caught my attention; It was a estrange shade going out of one of the bedrooms. I felt frightened; my heart started to beat very fast and made me shudder and I just wanted to run but then all my body froze up and I just couldn’t move. After a few seconds, the shade started to get closer and closer until the sunlight touched its face and then the rest of its body. It was the most disgusting and terrible thing that I have ever seen in my entire life: it was a skinny human body but I knew from the first moment I saw it that wasn’t human. It had no hair, its eyes were like two black holes, its hands were long and very white and it had sort of a metal necklace that caught it from the neck, ankle and wrists, that didn’t let it move too much.
But what does it has to do with Budd and Shirlee? then I moved my head slowly and I saw a picture of a little boy. I looked the pircture very carefully and then I looked at it. 'Oh my God...this just cant be...'
When I saw such aberration I just felt panic, I was so scared that my yelling were very weak and even I tried and tried to do it lauder nobody ever listened. So there I was, finally inside my neighbour house with a monster that was forcing to get rid of the necklaces until he did it. And when it was running to me I finally could move and I just started to run and I fell down and passed out.
-Lilly, Lilly!- I heard.
When I woke up I was on the couch and my husband was trying to wake me up with a big smile.
-What happened?, where is it? What did you do with it?- I asked almost crying and shouting.
-What are you saying?- Said Roy
-What am I saying?! There was a monster in the house next door! I saw it with my own eyes, I swear!
-Darling…what are you talking about?!, you have been asleep for almost two hours!
-What?- I was very confused. I knew I saw something evil
-Yes, you have been sleeping- Said Roy.
Then there was silence…I was in shock. I didn’t know if I was really sleeping or if it was true.
I looked Roy with a very confusing face he looked me back and suddenly we heard a creepy yelling coming from the house next door and a lot of noise. The monster was unchained.
:o nice alternative ending, i like it so much xd
ResponderEliminarwow! that's a nice ending! xD The last part surprised me! I think you should be a writer, a horror-stories writer :D
ResponderEliminarGood ending Belén, I completely agree with Constanza, you should be a horror-stories writer!.
ResponderEliminarnice nice it has a good ending! a shocking one.
ResponderEliminarAnd when you think that she dreamed all the creepy part you realize that it was not a dream!